A Day In Suburbia This is a by-ist point of view.
I did not like your recent submission thus, This one was also not good to me. It is not clever, I did not laugh and I also saw it coming. If you wanted to really be funny make it go really slow and only get half way across the lawn and like make a bird peck at it or something unexpected I predicted this one a mile away, blindfolded and mentally handicapped. I hope your like saying. "Welcome to McDonald's". I've seen flip books by a seven year old.
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- The Happy Philosopher. = )
